Some of the children have been learning to write descriptions this week. Since we have been talking about insects we decided to write descriptions of insects. The children used a writing checklist to make sure that their description had the name of the insect, its colour and a word describing the size of the insect. They used the books that we had been reading to find the words they needed. Take a look at the photos of these amazing writers at work.
Here is the video of the children reading their descriptions. They each drew a picture of their insect on kidpix which you can see at the start of each clip.
6 comments:
Wow, what fantastic descriptions! I liked how you talked about the colours of your insects. I can see that you have been practicing how to use kidpix, your pictures are great.
Miss Lepou
Great descriptions of the insects, well done all of you
Alex that was a teriffic story.
Thanks for the link Fiona. We have had a play with it already and we really enjoyed it.
Miss Mac
I like your story it is cool.
you read your story very clearly
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